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littlefairy
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since 2007-08-06
Posts 51
New York

0 posted 2007-12-01 01:12 AM



No matter how much I try,
I can’t make it stop,
Can’t help but let the clouds,
Drift over my mind,
Turning it numb,
And making me become unseeing,
Zoning out during times,
When I truly need to pay attention,
No matter how hard,
I push it back,
Fight it with all I have,
The slow cold dark feeling,
Of a life well ruined,
Consumes me,
How can I already be so dead,
When I’ve only just begun,
As I grew up I knew I’d die at a young age,
But I didn’t realize,
That it wouldn’t be a physical death,
Where I’d only be placed in a coffin,
And put underground,
I hadn’t known,
That’d it be the death of my soul,
Of the spirit I once cherished,
The slow torture of my caring heart,
That my eyes would go dull,
And I’d be able to see it,
Remembering that I actually liked them,
Before now when they were bright with colors,
Now I’m just one of the many people,
With dull eyes and a dead soul,
And I hope that the people who had caused,
My slow quiet death,
Are happy with what they’ve done,
And go to bed remembering,
What I once was.

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

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carolinabeen
Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69

1 posted 2007-12-01 07:39 AM


I'm not going to blow smoke
not up your arse
you hit me, closer than home
you said what I could not

it takes a person to know these things
you've hit me most in my soul
i hurt not near as much as
without you


carolinabeen
Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69

2 posted 2007-12-01 07:41 AM


Might I just beg for more
please


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