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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-11-29 10:55 AM



I fell on my way walking to school today

and then I just stayed there as all the cars were passing by

but falling wasn't the reason I started to cry

of course it was about some guy

we talked for six hours non stop

and I knew how I felt I liked him alot

his personality, laughter and his hair

and sometimes I can't stop myself when I stare

I've felt this way for two whole months

but kept it a secret, because I don't think that I'm good enough

now whenever I think of him, I cry every possible tear

how can someone I like so much, make me not want to be here?

I know he told me "Not right now"

but when will I know and how?

my body has never felt this way before

when we talk I wish we could be something more

but he can't help the way he feels

and I can't deny it either, every feeling for him is real

but will he ever go away?

and my broken heart, will I be okay?

what do I do when I see him?

should I still feel the same inside or just leave him?

and my feelings I had were so hard to spill

now broken inside, torn up, killed

I really wish I could just walk away

but every intension I feel for him just stays

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 2007-12-03 10:42 AM


This poem is about the same person that I wrote little did I know I know how he feels about me now and I guess I don't want to have these feeling for him but I do??

Kate

voice2bheard
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2 posted 2009-12-16 05:03 AM


HMM? NOW I'M TRYING TO REMEMBER WHO I WROTE THIS ABOUT???

Kate

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