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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-11-19 10:57 AM



Time and time again I'd sigh

Over and over everyday, I cry

sometimes I can't tell the color of the light

like somethins pulling me away, pulling me tight

I miss alot of things I used to do

and even worse, I still miss you

no matter where I go, I see your face

it seems you're there, all over the place

you never leave me, you never go away

and now I realized, there was more I still had to say

you kissed my lips, and you held my hand

then you broke my heart, I still don't understand

I'm still here living in sorrow

wondering what will happen in my life tomorrow

will I still be here, or will I have one last breath?

You never know what will happen with seconds left

So I tell you now what I've never done before

I've always drempted of one last kiss, just one more

What will happen with seconds left?

Should I tell you or hold my breath?

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 2007-11-19 10:58 AM


This poem is about someone and I'm still not sure what I should do, but its more of a question- what would you do if it was your last day? Would you tell the one you love that you love them? What would you do?

Kate

voice2bheard
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2 posted 2009-12-16 05:04 AM


WOW I REALLY KEPT THE SECRETS ON THIS ONE?? OR DID I?? LOL

Kate

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