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Dark Poetry #4

what you've done to me

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-11-18 12:58 PM

Your eyes told me yes, but your voice told me no

It seems that people were right saying " I told you so"

Your hand was so soft, your touch was so sweet

but to you I was someone you never wanted to meet

so why am I still thinking about you

when everything you told me was never true

you took my eyes, made me blind

took my mind so I think of you all the time

You took my soul empty and stolen

You took my heart, and now its broken

the memories that remain

seem only to be suffering and pain

the dark blue sky

and all the tears I cried

I don't think noone will ever replace

the things that you've done, made such a disgrace

and as you live your life a happy song

mine is never there its always gone

I miss you

but I don't want to

I wish you could've seen

all my pain and suffering, what you've done to me

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-11-18 01:10 PM

This poem to me was a little hard to write, it was really personal and about trying to get over someone. I know there has to be at least one person who can relate to this, because everyday, another heart is broken

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2007-11-19 12:37 PM

Kate.... I love your writing!

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-11-19 10:37 AM

Thanks Mystress May!!

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 05:05 AM

WOW SO HARD TO GET OVER? FORGOT IT TOOK ME 2 YEARS!!

Kate

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