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what you've done to me

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 11-18-2007 12:58 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard


Your eyes told me yes, but your voice told me no

It seems that people were right saying " I told you so"

Your hand was so soft, your touch was so sweet

but to you I was someone you never wanted to meet

so why am I still thinking about you

when everything you told me was never true

you took my eyes, made me blind

took my mind so I think of you all the time

You took my soul empty and stolen

You took my heart, and now its broken

the memories that remain

seem only to be suffering and pain

the dark blue sky

and all the tears I cried

I don't think noone will ever replace

the things that you've done, made such a disgrace

and as you live your life a happy song

mine is never there its always gone

I miss you

but I don't want to

I wish you could've seen

all my pain and suffering, what you've done to me


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 11-18-2007 01:10 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem to me was a little hard to write, it was really personal and about trying to get over someone. I know there has to be at least one person who can relate to this, because everyday, another heart is broken

Kate

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2 posted 11-19-2007 12:37 AM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

Kate.... I love your writing!
voice2bheard
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3 posted 11-19-2007 10:37 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks Mystress May!!
voice2bheard
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4 posted 12-16-2009 05:05 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW SO HARD TO GET OVER? FORGOT IT TOOK ME 2 YEARS!!

Kate

 
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