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Shake
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since 2006-11-17
Posts 40


0 posted 2007-11-12 11:50 AM


I think this is one of the best songs Ive ever written. Its about love, which the words "The Demon" is refering to. Lillith was supposedly the first "Eve" but something went wrong and she became a succubus, an evil demon that drains the life from things through, erm... suggestive processes...

Anyway, here's the song---

Well!

Theres a sinister serenity,
About her dark divinity,
Waiting like an enemy,
To carry me away!
A voice as sweet as roses,
All the fake smiles, all the poses,
With one eye shut, the other closes,
And she carries me away!

Got carried away by a demon in disguise,
Now it's got me by the throat,
But I won't cry, Lord knows why,
This demons got a reason to gloat...
'Cause it broke my heart...

I'm addicted to addiction,
And this demon, and this vixen,
Put me under crucifixtion,
It's eating me alive!
Is this a curse? No, its a blessin'
Got me cursed with this obbsession,
Guess it's time I learned my lesson,
This demon's eating me alive!

Got carried away by a demon in disguise,
Now it's got me by the throat,
But I won't cry, Lord knows why,
This demons got a reason to gloat...
'Cause it broke my heart...

It broke my heart(this demon)
It broke my heart(this demon)
It broke my heart(this demon)
This demon broke my heart and its eating me alive!

There's a sickly sweet perfume,
The smell of blood paints the room,
Ive opened up the gates of doom,
And Im throwing this demon back!

But Im addicted to addiction,
And Im cursed with an obbsession,
And in the eyes of this new vixen,
I see that demon coming back!

...Well hey Halajuhlua!
Come and get me Cupid...
.........Ill be waiting for the poison....


Feedback is appreciated!

© Copyright 2007 J. Maree - All Rights Reserved
Mystress May
Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
1 posted 2007-11-12 07:01 PM


Very nice... I love the flow of it and the rhythm.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Shake
Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40

2 posted 2007-11-17 10:34 AM


Thanks you for your feedback May

Gods and Demons,
Keys, Lyrics, and Vocals
~Shake

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