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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA 
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The dreams are coming from all around I hear them chasing me They are coming for my soul ripping through my mind Leaving nothing of that which was Me. I feel the dreams sweeping over me they are trying to take me I try to push away They are forcing me to stay Every turn I make they are in the way. I See the dreams surrounding me they tear the lids from my eyes I can't look away they are forcing me to see Everything I see is just another dream. Silence falls.... Nothing covers me.... It has come... Nothing has filled me... Dreams have fled... Darkness has bled... Into my mind's sea... Let me be... Sweet Nothing please take me... Let me be... Let me be... Sweet Darkness please heal me... Let me be... I AM ME!!! Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
"they tear the lids from my eyes" Totally sweet! I loved it. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
hehe thanks doll... yeah, that line made me giggle when I re-read it |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
very good devious one |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
thank nameless one... by the way, do you have a name? hehe |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
they tear the lids from my eyes I can't look away....This line was excellent, The whole thing was good |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
Just look at the copyright on one of my poems and you will find the answer |
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Shake Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40 |
Incredible! The feeling of entrapment was tangible! I felt like I was in a laberynth, seeking for a way out, only to be confronted by dead ends and misery at every turn! I loved this one! 8.5/10 Gods and Demons, |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Shake... thanks so much... that's the greatest compliment I can get, I think. Try reading my 'Blackness (revised version)'... it's the one work of mine that I truly love. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I lovre it! I felt that I could actuallt releate to this too!! Nicely written! Kate |
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