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Dark Poetry #4

EYE

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-11-09 10:52 AM

I see everything, everything you do

I am just here, I follow you

I see what you write

and how everythings in black and white

the pictures around you, all a blur

and everything that happens, or undisturbed

when you're open you leave a mark

but when you're closed, everything is dark

you won't let others see how you truely are

but to me inside, you're a shining star

if only you would let everything out

let everyone see what you're really about

don't just look and walk away

let them know what you have to say

I can't tell you what to do, stop living in fear

all I can do, is give you tears

show everyone you're devotion

all I can do is show your emotions

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-11-09 10:55 AM

"Eye" is about someones actual eye being the narrator seeing everything that goes on in the persons life, that the eyeball can't do anything its just there only the human can.

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2007-11-11 08:05 PM

I really like this one a lot. It is well written doll

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-11-13 10:38 AM

thank you!!!

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 05:09 AM

I STILL LOVE IT!!

Kate

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