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EYE

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I see everything, everything you do

I am just here, I follow you

I see what you write

and how everythings in black and white

the pictures around you, all a blur

and everything that happens, or undisturbed

when you're open you leave a mark

but when you're closed, everything is dark

you won't let others see how you truely are

but to me inside, you're a shining star

if only you would let everything out

let everyone see what you're really about

don't just look and walk away

let them know what you have to say

I can't tell you what to do, stop living in fear

all I can do, is give you tears

show everyone you're devotion

all I can do is show your emotions

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 11-09-2007 10:55 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

"Eye" is about someones actual eye being the narrator seeing everything that goes on in the persons life, that the eyeball can't do anything its just there only the human can.

Kate

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I really like this one a lot. It is well written doll
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3 posted 11-13-2007 10:38 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thank you!!!

Kate

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4 posted 12-16-2009 05:09 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I STILL LOVE IT!!

Kate

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