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voice2bheard
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0 posted 11-09-2007 10:47 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Siometimes when I close my eyes

its just so hard to recognize

like I just want to disappear

and noone will know that I'm here

I just want to throw it all away

start all over with a brand new day

leave my anger and sadness behind

start all over give my life another try

forget about my pains and worries

and let somebody finally get to know me

but is that so easy to do?

start all over with a brand new you

for the last five years

I've been so depressed, afraid and cried tears

every week I always had a breakdown

somehow I manage to do it when noones around

I always feel so alone, even when people are around me

but I just keep it all in and noone sees

why does my life have to be this way,

isn't there something I could do, something I could say

because I don't want to throw my life away

hold on, take a breath, one step back,

there must be something in my life, something I lack

" Start all over, fresh and new"

my mind says to me

" One day soon it'll come to you

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 11-09-2007 10:54 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem says that you shopuldn't live in the past make your life last do what you wna to do if something bad happens make it better!!!

Kate

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2 posted 11-11-2007 08:08 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

This is really nice... though the rhythm seems to go off track in the middle.
voice2bheard
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3 posted 11-13-2007 10:37 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thanks "doll"
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4 posted 12-16-2009 05:09 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YES I WISH!!

Kate

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