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How someone makes me feel

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 11-07-2007 09:20 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This is someone I've known for quite sometime now

then out of nowhere, feelings developed and I don't know how

I couldn't help but to keep loooking back at him

like my heart wanted him to win

it seems so strange, that I feel this way

now whenever hes around, I don't know what to say

my heart starts pounding, even skips a beat

because I'm always looking forward

to the next time we'll meet

I can't sleep at night, because you're always there

in my mind, and everything else is bare

why'd this happen, why'd you do this to me

and now sometimes I'm afraid, that I can't breathe

you make me laugh and you make me smile,

I like when you're around, I feel like a child

I don't know how, but these feeling are true

I guess I really am starting to like you

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 11-07-2007 09:21 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about someone I sort of like but he doesn't know yet, I'm not sure when or even if I should tell him

Kate

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2 posted 11-07-2007 12:29 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

Kate.... in your 'encourage critiques' quote you write 'LIVE YOUR LIFE TO THE FULLEST'. So, if you don't tell people how you feel, you'll regret it later. Rejection only hurts for a little while until you realize it doesn't need to hurt at all. And if you get what you want, then isn't it worth that momentary fear of being rejected? Just my not so humble opinion, doll.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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3 posted 11-08-2007 11:00 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks for reminding me!!!
voice2bheard
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4 posted 12-16-2009 05:11 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW I CAN'T BELIEVE IT THIS ONE WAS ABOUT BENJAMIN PASSET STILL IS OF COURSE!! OMG I REMEMBER NOW!! LOL THOSE WERE THE DAYS!!

Kate

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