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Dark Poetry #4

How someone makes me feel

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-11-07 09:20 AM

This is someone I've known for quite sometime now

then out of nowhere, feelings developed and I don't know how

I couldn't help but to keep loooking back at him

like my heart wanted him to win

it seems so strange, that I feel this way

now whenever hes around, I don't know what to say

my heart starts pounding, even skips a beat

because I'm always looking forward

to the next time we'll meet

I can't sleep at night, because you're always there

in my mind, and everything else is bare

why'd this happen, why'd you do this to me

and now sometimes I'm afraid, that I can't breathe

you make me laugh and you make me smile,

I like when you're around, I feel like a child

I don't know how, but these feeling are true

I guess I really am starting to like you

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-11-07 09:21 AM

This poem is about someone I sort of like but he doesn't know yet, I'm not sure when or even if I should tell him

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2007-11-07 12:29 PM

Kate.... in your 'encourage critiques' quote you write 'LIVE YOUR LIFE TO THE FULLEST'. So, if you don't tell people how you feel, you'll regret it later. Rejection only hurts for a little while until you realize it doesn't need to hurt at all. And if you get what you want, then isn't it worth that momentary fear of being rejected? Just my not so humble opinion, doll.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-11-08 11:00 AM

Thanks for reminding me!!!

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 05:11 AM

WOW I CAN'T BELIEVE IT THIS ONE WAS ABOUT BENJAMIN PASSET STILL IS OF COURSE!! OMG I REMEMBER NOW!! LOL THOSE WERE THE DAYS!!

Kate

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