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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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New York

0 posted 2007-11-05 10:53 AM



You were never there

did you even care?

Until one day, you finally had a chance to say

I'm really sorry, please forgive me

theres a part of me I never wanted you to see

I have some problems in my life

and I'm over here trying to make things right

just wanted to let you know,

that I never want to let you go

that I love you

and I'm trying so hard to make it through

baby just believe we'll be together someday soon

I have a confession

I have depression

and thats why I had to leave you

and your sister too,

I have some problems in my life

and I want to make things right

baby I'm sorry, but you know its true,

baby I love you

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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New York
1 posted 2007-11-05 10:55 AM


This poem is very personal its about my mother, I haven't seen her in 5 years and I really miss her, she called me the other day and said she misses me alot.  The reason why she left me was because she has some problems- depression, anger management and a few others, she lives out of state and this poem is her telling me she still loves me

Kate

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
2 posted 2007-11-05 09:04 PM


well doll, I hope that you continue to keep some relationship with your mom... I had ostrasized my mom from our family due to her drug and alcohol abuse and she ended up calling when she was dying (years after I'd last spoken to her). I watched her over the last few months of her life as she quickly deteriorated. I am sad at the decision I had made to turn my back on her because I keep thinking I may have been able to 'fix' her (I know that is silly). Anyway... I feel you on this one. I like it.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2007-11-07 09:10 AM


Thanks and like I said before I love you!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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4 posted 2009-12-16 05:12 AM


WELL NOW MY MOTHER IS DOING A LOT BETTER!

Kate

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