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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-11-04 11:17 AM


The cold sky above me is crying
To meet my last day, one more story is over.
A wrist, razorblade - now I hope I'm becoming
The pain in your heart. In your mind, never sober
You'll see just a guise of me, bleeding so badly.
I'm dying in pain - that is what I have chosen.
And if you had been there, you still could have saved me.
You could... it's too late. Now I'm lying here, frozen.

A denizen in all the world, a denial,
My f---ing damned life has been nothing but battles.
This easy escape is the last of my trials,
And with my last breath your dark sky will be shattered.
My death is revenge if my life has been broken.
It's been a mistake - it's my debt to erase it.
I have no more reason to live - I'm forgotten.
My sorrow has come to the tragical ending.

Your life will go on in your cardboard castle;
You'll finish your part, and you'll join me in years.
My poisionous blood all your questions will answer.
Goodbye... I've got over the last of my fears.

(My death is revenge if my life has been broken.
It's been a mistake - it's my debt to erase it.
I have no more reason to live - I'm forgotten.
My sorrow has come to the tragical ending.)

And if you had been there, you still could have saved me.
You could...
You could...


© Copyright 2007 April A. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-11-04 12:48 PM


nice poem although it tells of a relly sad story hope to read more.
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Mystress May
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2 posted 2007-11-04 07:53 PM


I love it... it's beautiful!
A Beautiful Disaster
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3 posted 2007-11-13 09:48 AM


Thank you a lot!
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