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When did I say that I love you

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When did I say that I love you

When did I look into your eyes and say I do

What makes you think I thought about you

I can't believe every word you said, I thought was true

when did I say thta I love you

and right in front of me

I was so blind, I couldn't see

Oh God when did I say

when did I say, that I love you

Kate

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1 posted 11-04-2007 12:27 AM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

I like it. It leaves me hanging though... I feel as though it's the beginning of something more.
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2 posted 11-05-2007 10:46 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Yes originally its one of my songs, but I also decided to make it a poem
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3 posted 12-16-2009 05:15 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

UH OH ABOUT A BAD EX!!

Kate

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