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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-11-01 01:21 PM



You said to me that I can't do this anymore

and I had to ask you why, what for

You said that you didn't want me around

well good luck with your life theres something else that I found

the deepest pill will sve me now

don't need to ask how

anything goes through your mind, anytime

the deepest pill will shut me out, without a doubt

the deepest pill with the blood and scars I show, overflows

anything that, I go through

the deepest pill will save me now, from anything, everything but you


Kate

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Mystress May
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1 posted 2007-11-04 12:50 PM


I felt this one... truly felt it.... I love it.
voice2bheard
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2 posted 2007-11-05 10:45 AM


thank you, like i said before I'm really liking you girl!!
voice2bheard
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3 posted 2007-11-05 01:26 PM


thanks like always!!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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4 posted 2009-12-16 05:14 AM


THANKS AND IT'S ALSO ACTUALLY REALLY SAD ABOUT A PERSON DOING DRUGS TO RE LEAVE PAIN FROM THE FAMILY!

Kate

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