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voice2bheard
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0 posted 10-31-2007 09:28 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard


The woods are quiet, pretty lonely too

Until someone goes there, then theres something to do

two people happen to go there, on a sunny day

they look at each other with nothing to say

a simple smile is all it takes

they both open up, finally awake

they get closer and closer, til nothing else is in view

one says to the other " Its just us two"

they're holding hands, and then they see each others breath in clear view

He starts to touch her, she knows what he wants to do

and as their lips touch, both of them know

they didn't want to stop, never wanted to let go

their hands slowly start to fade away

for they both wanted each other to stay

" I guess this is goodbye, I'll see you again"

and never did they speak another word to each other, for that was the end of them being friends
© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-31-2007 10:42 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is really personal to me because this poem is something that actually happend to me in real life, pretty much every detail has happend. There was this person I was dating and I loved him and I still do even though we never talk anymore. I  miss him so much, but I know that he doesn't think about me, what do you think I should do??
Mystress May
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2 posted 10-31-2007 01:34 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

That was well written....


as far as what to do.... you can't force some things... you just have to move forward with your life.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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3 posted 11-01-2007 01:12 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thank you nice to know someone actually likes my work well besides my english teachers (lol)
voice2bheard
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4 posted 12-16-2009 05:17 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW!! AN EX MOMENT!! *(WELL IT WAS WRITTEN WHILE WE WERE STILL DATING)

Kate

 
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