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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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New York

0 posted 2007-10-31 09:09 AM



You walk by, I always see you in the hall

We never say anything to each other

not even once, never at all

Its hard to say you were someone I know

but that was what happend, so long ago

now you've moved on, I'm never in your mind

but to me you're always there, all the time

you're someone that I can never stop thinking about

no matter how many times I tried to let it out

I guess its been so long and don't know what to do

I can't believe what I'm about to say

I'm still in love with you


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2007-10-31 09:23 AM


This poem is about a guy I know and still happen to be in love with him after 3 years, but we never talk anymore whatsoever. I still think about him even though I don't want to.
Prudy
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since 2007-10-22
Posts 13
the prison inside me
2 posted 2007-11-01 12:32 PM


I am going through this right know with this girl I like.  A lot like I am going through.  Also read your other poem it's the same thing with me.  I just felt that I was dead inside although my body was alive.  In fact I wrote a poem called Prison in my soul dealing with it.  Check it out if you want to.
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
3 posted 2007-11-01 01:10 PM


thanks its nice to know that theres someone out there who knows what I'm going through. Don't worry I'll check out some of your poems too.
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
4 posted 2007-11-01 01:14 PM


well nice to know someone agrees, so thanks, nice to have someone appreciate my work.
Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
5 posted 2007-11-04 12:53 PM


hey doll... I've been reading your poems... it looks like you're going through a tough time. It's something I've been through and it has helped me develop a shell... kind of like how a scar helps thicken the skin and makes us tougher. I'm sorry you're experiencing such pain but I do wish you the easiest way through it.
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
6 posted 2007-11-05 10:29 AM


Thank you, you know I'm really starting to like you alot, you've been helping me out alot!

Kate

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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New York
7 posted 2009-12-16 05:16 AM


PRETTY MUCH BEING INVISIBLE

Kate

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