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Heaviness |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA 
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Heaviness is settling upon my soul As I realize that I am still alone. Look around at an empty home Wondering if this will be my tomb. I lay the bricks with bleeding hands To keep them out of my darkened land. Look around and still I see There is no way out... nowhere to flee. Another layer of morter upon the bricks As I try in vain to keep them from getting in. Looking inside and all I see Is a little girl watching... unable to scream. Turrets around me... to the sky, to the moon The sides are so even and dangerously smooth. Carefully built with these bleeding fingers And still I sit here... and still terror lingers... |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
To build a wall that not even you can escape. I loved it. In fact I could relate to it quite well. |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
WOW!!! this is amazing I love how it flows together Turrets around me... to the sky, to the moon The sides are so even and dangerously smooth. Carefully built with these bleeding fingers And still I sit here... and still terror lingers... wonderful write love it much thank you for sharing this |
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