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Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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Taunton, MA

0 posted 2007-10-26 09:53 PM



Seeking peace within my soul
History has paid its toll.
No longer lingers at the gate
With open arms, accept its fate.
Making peace with what’s been dealt
Icy hearts begin to melt.
Stand alone, but still stand strong
Eternity seems not so long.
Finding peace within our hearts
Look ahead to hopeful starts.
Although the past is filled with gray
Learn to live within today.
No regrets, for strength is gained
Enlightenment has been attained.
Selfish moments built a wall
Selfless acts shall make it fall.
Hold on to those you’ve pushed away
Cling to them when they can’t stay.


The End has passed, a beginning is near
I search my heart… I find you there.

© Copyright 2007 Amanda M. Stonis - All Rights Reserved
Verg
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since 2007-10-25
Posts 52
Colorado
1 posted 2007-10-26 10:01 PM


I love PartII as much and more than part one.
Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
2 posted 2007-10-26 10:21 PM


Nice.

A good flow through to the second scene.

Loved it.

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