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Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
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Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2007-10-26 11:30 AM


The pain our hearts might feel....


When the light from the sun fades,
And you are taken into the darkness,
Come; join me, as we dance,
Without our bonds,
Dance in the moon light.

The golden thread that binds my heart to his,
Must snap, before the silken ribbon twist,
It’s self around my heart… and turns to leaden chains,
Pulling me head first
tumbling into the darkness,
Of the newly reviled ravine.

I must let go… release my bond,
The river calls to me, sings of the wonder,
Her dark waters hold,
I long to immerse my Mind, Soul, and Heart,
Within the sanctuary of her peaceful waters.
To hear the stories of the ocean,
Powerful and ruled by his queen

I long to float among the harmonious tides,
To feel the lull and numbing quiet.
To hear my heart, and what I desire.

I crave the tranquil oblivion, of the nothingness,
The chill of the casket, made with ice,
That surrounds my heart.
The key long lost, and forgotten.

But no, I must, I need to, I desire to,
Immerse my self in the stream instead,
To feel the light rain kissing my face,
To feel the wind rise from the cliffs,
Spreading my wings, whipping my hair.

I hunger for, the understanding,
Of which the minds of many,
Filled with compassion may give to me.
To be, understood by those I respect,
To know, that I am alive,
To know that I belong, somewhere.

I wish to share the love of which I feel,
Towards life and all it represents.
To share my knowledge,
And wisdom of experience, within my past,
To share my fears and yet,
Not scare them with my nightmares.

I need, long, wish, desire, hunger and crave,
To be set free, to feel the tides of emotion,
Crashing over me to carry my thoughts on wings,
To soar above the cliff,
I will live and you, you may hurt me,
But I will always dance in the moon light,
Throw off my shackles,
For I, I am… Free.

The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy.

© Copyright 2007 Rebecca Mackie - All Rights Reserved
Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
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1 posted 2007-10-26 12:12 PM


Very Impressive Abbeon, I liked it very much.

Thanks.

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2 posted 2007-10-26 12:15 PM


to quote my favorite part, I would have to copy and paste the entire poem..

this is so completely beautiful...one for my library for sure!


Verg
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since 2007-10-25
Posts 52
Colorado
3 posted 2007-10-26 03:33 PM


How can i describe how beautiful this poem really is, it's just amazing. I LOVE IT.
Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
4 posted 2007-11-17 11:50 PM


Thank you for your kind words i find that poetry is my favorite form of self expression. and one of the only ways i can express my self.

The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy.

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
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Great White North
5 posted 2007-11-18 02:28 PM


this is a world class poem...bravo!!!!!!
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