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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-10-26 10:57 AM



You make a knife look like shiny silver

You make a bullet look like a chest of gold

You make a grave look like a saviour

the only thing that I can hold

You never understood and you never will

the simplest things can kill

its like penetration through the body

and you don't even know me

you make a knife look like shiny silver

your voice is worst than buring fire

being wrapped between barbed wire

you're so much pain, you just won't go away

everything you do is always the same

I can't stand you and I never will

can't believe someones with you still

and you wonder why I'm isolated

well I just can't take it


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 2007-10-26 04:38 PM


This poem is about someone who was in a relationship and the silver being the knife represents the person that hurt that person so bad that they're saying that you make all bad things look good. So really being hurt really bad in a relationship and having them being represented by a bullet, knife, and a grave.
voice2bheard
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2 posted 2009-12-16 05:20 AM


YEA VERY DANGEROUS AND SERIOUS BUT NO DIDN'T ACTUALLY HAPPEN THANK GOD!!

Kate

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