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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-10-26 10:31 AM



Your touch was so sweet, it made me cry

Your voice was so beautiful, those baby blue eyes

I loved everything about you, what you wear

When you would smile, I even loved your hair

but now their just memories thats fading away,

it seems that I want to forget with each passing day

but somehow still you remain in my heart

all the things that we've done now torn apart

why can't I forget you, your amazing face,

because everywhere I go, its all a disgrace,

and when hearing lyrics from your favorite band,

things I know now that I didn't understand

"No more secrets, no more lies,

I can see right through your alibies"

or " I wannna love you, I gotta have you,

don't wanna let you down again"

now I just wish I had my best friend,

I can't remember the last time you gave me a wave,

but I know that no matter what happens

I'll take you to the grave


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 2007-10-26 10:34 AM


This poem is about a guy I knew very well, I also used lyrics from my favorite band right now that most don't know Papa Roach, just wanted to make sure they got credit!!


Seeker72
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2 posted 2007-10-26 12:15 PM


That was a good read.
voice2bheard
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3 posted 2007-10-26 04:33 PM


thank you that means alot coming from you, hopefully I'l be able to write one as well as you do
voice2bheard
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4 posted 2009-12-16 05:22 AM


OMG BRAD AGAIN!! LOL

Kate

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