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Dark Poetry #4

Untitled - You decide???

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-10-25 09:29 AM

They say that many opportunties only come once

But how would you feel if you later relized its gone?

People in my life had a saying they would always say-

"Live everyday like its your last,

because before you know it, its gone"

What will happen when our lives are over?

What are people saying over your shoulder?

Do you always think people are talking about you?

Are there times when you don't know what to do?

Theres people who say I love you,

do they know what it means?

or does it pass them by

like nothing they've ever seen?

Life is a precious gift

however many times it been wasted

how can you live your life, if you never tasted it?

try not to cry, try your best to win

why end your life, when you just begin?
Kate

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-10-25 09:30 AM

I hope someone out there can relate to this poem

Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

2 posted 2007-10-25 10:18 AM

Ah I feel like I have gone back in time and read my early work, very good.

As for a title, personally I would call it HUMAN NATURE, as it is human nature to waste the life you have... still thats just my dark 2 cents worth.

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-10-25 10:29 AM

thanks for the comment!! Starting to like you how old are you by the way? seeker 72?

Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

4 posted 2007-10-25 11:06 AM

Thank you.

Please never take my words as a put down if I make a comment for improvement.

That is never my intention.

As for age... read THAT GUY YOU HATED I was asked the very same question just the other day. ;-)

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2007-10-26 10:24 AM

Well what is it??

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

6 posted 2009-12-16 05:23 AM

WOW YEA REALLY OLD!!

Kate

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