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voice2bheard
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0 posted 10-25-2007 09:29 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard


They say that many opportunties only come once

But how would you feel if you later relized its gone?

People in my life had a saying they would always say-

"Live everyday like its your last,

because before you know it, its gone"

What will happen when our lives are over?

What are people saying over your shoulder?

Do you always think people are talking about you?

Are there times when you don't know what to do?

Theres people who say I love you,

do they know what it means?

or does it pass them by

like nothing they've ever seen?

Life is a precious gift

however many times it been wasted

how can you live your life, if you never tasted it?

try not to cry, try your best to win

why end your life, when you just begin?
Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 10-25-2007 09:30 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I hope someone out there can relate to this poem
Seeker72
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2 posted 10-25-2007 10:18 AM       View Profile for Seeker72   Email Seeker72   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeker72

Ah I feel like I have gone back in time and read my early work, very good.

As for a title, personally I would call it HUMAN NATURE, as it is human nature to waste the life you have... still thats just my dark 2 cents worth.
voice2bheard
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3 posted 10-25-2007 10:29 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thanks for the comment!! Starting to like you how old are you by the way? seeker 72?
Seeker72
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4 posted 10-25-2007 11:06 AM       View Profile for Seeker72   Email Seeker72   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeker72

Thank you.

Please never take my words as a put down if I make a comment for improvement.

That is never my intention.

As for age... read THAT GUY YOU HATED I was asked the very same question just the other day.   ;-)
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5 posted 10-26-2007 10:24 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Well what is it??
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6 posted 12-16-2009 05:23 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW YEA REALLY OLD!!

Kate

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