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SOMETHING YOU MUST READ AND REPLY!!! -I have to get home to my mommy

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voice2bheard
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can you ever have the right friend? Can you ever have the right family? Life isn't perfect whatsoever. My life I know isn't great at all. Life is a precious gift that you only receive once. Theres a poem I made up and I think yo should read it and tell me what you think and if you'd ever been in this situation or not?? or if you know someone who has been?
  There was a little girl coming home from school, 2 men approach her and asked if she would like to go home with them, she says no I have to get home to my mommy, they say why not? we have milk and cookies were sure that you'd love. She says no thank you I have to get home to my mommy. They then said we have several toys that we bought for you so you can play. She says no thanks I have to get home to my mommy. They then say listen kid you're coming home with us whether you like it or not. Then she says My mommy told me never to talk to strangers and your a stranger. They say no were not your mommy sent us to come get you.  The little girl still says I have to get home to my mommy.
Later on fliers were on every post looking for a young girl the mother died several decades later when she was 68, she still continued everyday until her death looking for her little girl. The only thing anyone ever heard was " I have to get home to my mommy" There were no clues or traces, but everytime someone walked down that road they would hear " I have to get home to my mommy".

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voice2bheard
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My poem I have to get home to my mommy is very tragic, and it does actually happen in real life we just don't know it. Children are being taken everyday, one will be taken, another heart broken. Some families never see their children again will you?
Seeker72
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2 posted 10-24-2007 11:30 AM       View Profile for Seeker72   Email Seeker72   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeker72

Not being mean but I will not personally read this until you space it out and use punctuation.

Anyone else game... good luck
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3 posted 10-25-2007 09:04 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thanks for the info im new sorry
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4 posted 12-16-2009 05:24 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YEA OLD N BAD i KNOW!! READ MY BETTER NEWER ONES!! OK?

Kate

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