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A CHILD IN THE NIGHT

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 10-24-2007 10:40 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard


The child was lonely, the child was there
The child only needed, somone who cared
The child would look through the window,
but was never seen, guess nothing would happen,
nothing in between, "you lied, you hurt me,
and I never figured it out, what you really ment,
what I was all about, how could you leave me so alone,
and bare, guess I never mattered, guess noone cares"
now the child walks in the night, trying to win the battle, still putting up a fight, when will it stop? when will it be over? the child keeps saying looking over their shoulder, you win, I'll go,they whisper in the wind, but will there ever be a day when this will end? the child keeps walking, quick your almost their, but when they got to their place, they found it bare, mommy, daddy, the child cries, when they saw their parents, dead they lie, whats going on? why are they like this? when the child bends over for one last kiss. Someone walks by the child yells for help but the stranger keeps going like theres noone their. "Its alright mommy's here, don't worry about a thing, dry those tears" " But mommy how can you talk to me" the child cries. Then he sees his body where he lies.

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Seeker72
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1 posted 10-24-2007 11:34 AM       View Profile for Seeker72   Email Seeker72   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeker72

What is it with the block writing?

I'm really not trying to sound mean but I'm just not sure why you would think anyone could enjoy reading your work like this.
voice2bheard
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2 posted 12-16-2009 05:26 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YEA YEA YEA LIKE I'VE SAID BETTER WORK AFTER THESE 3!!

Kate

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3 posted 01-30-2011 02:33 PM       View Profile for LaGraceLa   Email LaGraceLa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LaGraceLa

This is really really good. I love how your poem is so brutally honest. It is the kind of poem that haunts you and makes you think. Good job, I think it is wonderful.
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