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Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
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Oregon USA

0 posted 2007-10-22 01:30 AM


THIS MOMENT IN TIME


Right now

This moment in time

My mind wonders

It rushes through to places filled with excitement

So far away from my repetitive world

This moment in time

As the rain hits the windows do I wonder of the beaches of Maui

Golden stretched and smooth

The people friendly

The trees, the flowers huge

My life so nothing compared to

The black asphalt of my world cracks

Letting in the waters to freeze with the coming winter

Widening even further with every winters pass

The uniform gray

Do I wear

Does it match the clouds as they pass silently above

Were I to stand in an open space could I vanish?

Whisked away without ever rushing past with them

To places unknown

In this moment of time

Do I wish for death

Would I be so brave to face it

The one true given of life is its end

The one thing we can all count on

Without question

I watch the clouds leave

Watch them die

They may change

Come down to our level

Yet they always end up back where they started

To begin again

A new

Like the sands of Maui

Washed away

Only to come back somewhere different

Mixed with so many things it found along the way

As the dull branches of a dying tree tap against my window

Do I wake myself to find

I am lost

In this moment in time

[This message has been edited by Seeker72 (10-22-2007 02:11 AM).]

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Angel101¢¾!
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since 2007-10-21
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Lost in pain
1 posted 2007-10-22 06:38 PM


wow seeker72 ur really good check out my poem pain its one of my faves!!!
Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
2 posted 2007-10-22 08:37 PM


Thank you once again angel.

I checked out Pain, it was good I liked it.

Angel101¢¾!
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since 2007-10-21
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Lost in pain
3 posted 2007-10-22 10:22 PM


thanks
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