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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
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Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-02-20 11:33 AM



I can’t see it,
I feel it,
You’re slipping away like water dropping from my eyes,
Blood running fast down your body,
I feel you breath on my neck,

I hear your words though out my day,
I see you walking with me,
Just like always, you’re with me,
But no one sees you, hears you, but me,
You say the same thing over and over,

I love you, I hate you,
You haunt me,
I still see you in a hospital bed,
I still see you above me in bed,
I still love you,

You still hate me,
Come back, babe
Go away,
I hear your heart pumping,
Blood flowing fast out of you heart, Tears down your eyes,

Crystal walls all around me block from reality,
People screaming in my ears, yelling till I can’t hear,
I know it’s all in my head,
I still feel you inside of me,
Holding me close to you,

I can’t get close, I’m too far away,
Reality says let go,
But can’t manage to, I still love you,
Why did you go?
I need you here babe, babe, I need you here

Tears running down my eyes constantly, constantly,
Thanks for the time together,
This is my finale goodbye,


© Copyright 2008 Abigail Arnold - All Rights Reserved
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-02-20 04:53 PM


this a very sad poem. i know that feeling.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me showing me, no fear will show.

KatKali
Member
since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder
2 posted 2008-02-21 06:27 PM


You know what I found my sister thought two people broke up, but one person died, I want to make sure every one knows that, Sorry.. If I made it unclear

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

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