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comoloco7
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0 posted 2007-09-28 09:01 AM



Nowhere To Be Found

It’s hard to be around you, but you're so far away
The love that I can’t give you can neither make you stay.
Hands down, without a doubt my lungs close when you arrive,
Just like that, with little else, making it hard to survive.
I feel compelled to speak but you take away my words
Might be hard to believe, you're always in my thoughts.
Detached, alone and happy we play into our fears
With a single act of emotion they seem to disappear
And fade away into the mist of worlds unknown
We loose ourselves when we're alone, when we're alone
Its then my hear and thoughts
Inspired by your words
Take flight and dream away
Oh God I wish the day
Will never end because tomorrow
I know that you will be nowhere to be found.

All I can wish for now is to feel your breath whisper softly
Sweet nothings into my ear, kiss me gently
Hold me close, don’t let go, I'll show you how
For tomorrow, you will be nowhere to be found.

In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died.

© Copyright 2007 M. Cano - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-09-28 11:36 PM


wow I can't belive no one has replied to this it was amazing. I loved the emotion and the flow everything was amazing
Krysti

Ethan Halo
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2 posted 2007-09-29 08:33 PM


i'm not sure if you meant it like this, but i think this captures fantastically the desperation and fantasy associated with a one night stand.

and i love it.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

comoloco7
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3 posted 2007-11-14 06:22 AM


hunnie girl, I would like to thank you for supporting my poems and posting replies, it keeps the threads alive.  I will continue to support your work so we all have a chance to see how wonderful it is.

In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died.

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