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Dark Poetry #4

Paradox

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

0 posted 2007-09-27 06:48 PM

Paradox

Dominant paradigm,
these words were the key.

That opened the sanctum,
and set the Doppleganger free.

Then just before dawn,
he came really near.

Spoke his name in German,
for me to hear.

I had no idea,
or the power I'd invoke.

As I rose from sleep,
and his name I spoke.

Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2007-09-27 11:57 PM

I liked it.

You work it seems is always good.

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

2 posted 2007-09-28 12:10 PM

Thank you Seeker72, very kind of you to say so.
moon.

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2007-09-28 11:29 AM

I like this poem it seem to flow freely from you. Your writing is really honest.

also your poems seem to have real meaning

Abbeon

The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy.

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

4 posted 2007-09-28 05:38 PM

Thanks Abbeon, I welcome your thoughtful remarks.
moon.

Twilight Warrior
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since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

5 posted 2007-09-29 10:58 AM

Once again your words challenge my vocabulary. Good write my friend, and keep on writing.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

moondogz
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since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

6 posted 2007-09-29 09:44 PM

Thanks for your words of encouragement Warrior.
moon.

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