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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
Posts 69


0 posted 2007-09-18 12:44 PM



the death of society rings at home
people not selfish enough yet
to actually look at television
as reality
if it isn't real enough i wonder
life that is
why
of course there are those that bleed eachother
because they need to talk about something
other
than reality

call them episodes
call them chapters
call them whatever you want
but a show
a show
maybe you should because you might show
place
win

haha

the breath of reality should be ringing right now
but people are not introverted yet
to actually give up what they are
as real as real can hurt
love
stigmatize
enjoy
what life has to offer

sure there are those that slam choreographed moves to their friends
and watch them die
there may be muggings and plane, just plane crashes
that's reality

today, tonight, whatever the time
you are reading the JEREMEY show
because I do
you are, and right NOW

now that is a network

J.L. Koehler


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Kitherion
Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181
Johannesburg
1 posted 2007-09-19 12:38 PM


I like it.... I just think that the "haha" was a bit misplaced.

"Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..."

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