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MindBeyondBody
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since 2007-08-02
Posts 14
Florida,United States

0 posted 2007-09-10 11:34 AM


At birth i Came in this world alone now im a few moments away from death and i still feel the same way alone all alone after all these years on earth things still havent changed there always the same as i try to escape this feeling of loneliness it gets worse day by day its like a disease comsuming my soul,body and mind looks like im going to leave this world alone people try so hard trying to find somebody or something just trying to be accepted in the world but in the end your always alone.alone in the dark trying to find your way to the light but theres no point in searching its a hopeless fight


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Tears-of-Sanity
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since 2007-09-05
Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts
1 posted 2007-09-13 12:54 PM


Alone huh!

Well, maybe giving people chances wont let loneliness consume someone.  I was lost in loneliness onece upon a time, but I tried looking at the positive side of everything and saw that the world is not as dark as I thought.  However, I like the way you expres thoughts   That was a nice one ^^'

Tears of Sanity~

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