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Streaming down a tranquil sea

0 posted 2007-09-09 04:13 AM


The death of those I loved
Stopped me in my tracks.
Ive been a dead needle in life.
Stuck in a hole
Trying to Climb up

Depression
Anxiety
Suicidal Tendencies
No modivation

Instead of helping
You insult me
Tell me Im a loser
Pathetic human being

I try not to judge
For no one is perfect
I try not to talk back
For my words have thought

You lash out
You scream
You make me cry
I cant take it

I go to sleep
Wishing sometimes I would not wake up
But everyday
I lose more and more

the heart I once...
Once thought was complete.

Just like this bottle of Jd
Almost half gone
I continue to write
to express your hatred.

with every line
All i can think about is your hatred
Why is this?
Why is it that i think only of your evils

I try not to shout
"thou shall not scream"
I try not to hurt
"thou shall not murder

As the last drops
Pour into my mouth
I slowly
Slowly...stand up on this chair
Tie a knot and release.

My breath is getting short now.
My eyes are slowly dimming into the light
My memories
My pain
Slowly dissappearing

"thou shall not misuse"

I wish this commandment was true
If my life is so useless
Why am I murdering the soul purpose to live?
Why am I hurting those who loved me?

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Stars, though unseen on dark nights. Are still there, just hidden away. Twinkling, winking at us, and laughing at our dismay

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