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ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
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0 posted 2007-09-04 11:19 AM


Torn away pieces, hot, sticky, agonizing,
nothing to stop the burning of my flesh.

Scars left behind, rough, showing fathomless damage,
yet I move on slowly and steadily, crawling.

A nightmare for each wound would fill eternity,
screams would go on forever.

Light seems to drive me,
the slightest possibility of hope lingers.

Through the screams I hear a sound,
a beautiful soft melody, where is it?

It's just past the strips of flesh,
and the edge of my stretched out fingers.


© Copyright 2007 Lisa A Joost - All Rights Reserved
Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
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on the roof again
1 posted 2007-10-09 05:05 AM


no night stays black forever, nor does any storm constantly pour.

this hits me right in the gut, lisa.

don't lose hope; keep the faith in yourself.
cause when it gets down to the worst of it, that can be all you've got.

my heart and thoughts are with you.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
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2 posted 2007-10-10 10:51 AM


Thank you for your comment.  The light is what keeps me going.  It has always kept me going.  lisa
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