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Dark Poetry #4

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The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

0 posted 2007-08-30 02:47 PM

Rising from the depths of Hell.
Crying for the dinner bell.

The minions rage,scream,and moan.
Their bellies empty, start to groan.

Hungering for despairing souls.
Trapped inside abysmal holes.

Fleeing from their demonic grasp.
Stinging like the venomous asp.

The raging hoards from the ninth gate.
Trying to find a human mate.

So they can spread their villainous spawn.
Until all the good in this world is gone.

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2007-09-01 12:46 PM

Spawn and Gone don't rhyme.

Still it was good.

When I finished reading I said in my mind... "Spawn and Gawn"

I'm not American so maybe thats my short fall.

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

2 posted 2007-10-11 09:24 PM

Spawn and gone do so rhyme! and i liked it.

warrior undefeated

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

3 posted 2007-10-11 11:51 PM

As I stated I also like it.

Spawn and Gone depending upon which country you are from do not rhyme.

I wasn't trying to upset anyone.

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