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Dark Poetry #4

KILL YOUR MOTHER?

teddymarvelle
Junior Member

since 2007-08-26

Posts 47
california usa

0 posted 2007-08-28 12:33 PM

The death knell is ringing and the victim is waiting,

It won't be too long, though she'll suffer along,

Till death rings ding dong.

cash is where it's at, but remember the tide is bad,

So beware, Be canny and take care,

For prevention is better than to dare.

A World of Corruption,

A World of Destruction,

Power stations burning

how slowly are we learning?

Trees logged,

The air bogged,

global warming,

to me alarming

The world dying,

a globe that is frying

corporations gaining

from a world straining

Profits made,

Concrete laid,

The urban spread,

Species dead,

how do we change the mother's fate?

when all we see is "real estate"

a mothers love never dies

dont' let that become one more of the lies

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

1 posted 2007-09-07 09:58 PM

Very well put teddy...powerful poem, thanks.

MegMeg
Member

since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

2 posted 2007-09-14 04:37 PM

o my goodness, it gave me chills and makes me want to go save the earth, it's excellent.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2007-09-26 12:13 PM

A strong and powerful subject. your poem is well written. i liked it thanks.

Abbeon.

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