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Dark Poetry #4

Mornings

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2007-08-21 07:01 AM

Mornings

My alarm clock warns me
I must work for a living.
Swinging my legs off the bed,
I sit for a few minutes,
letting my dreams retreat.
Stumbling to the bathroom,
I try and find my face
in the mirror.
In the kitchen I look
in the fridge for something
that i can never find.
I grab my keys
and head out the door.

My teardrops wait
on the counter by the coffee
for my return.

Yoin

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2007-08-21 08:51 AM

My first read of yours..and I am going to go find more...

wonderful! and welcome!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-08-22 12:44 PM

"My teardrops wait
on the counter by the coffee
for my return."

I liked this!! It really touched me when i read it, which is good

I can't wait to read more!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

3 posted 2007-08-23 04:42 PM

thank you both for your kind words.

Yoin

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