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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
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0 posted 2007-08-20 04:43 AM



My still heart for only one did beat
And now I kneel here at her feet
My heart now broken my head is bowed
To you my soul and body was vowed
For now that I’m among the dead
For you I know I would have bled
But now my face is grave as is my tread
My heart now filled with sorrow and dread
I look up slowly at your tear stained eyes
And plead to you in silent pain filled cries

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
Posts 96
Johannesburg
1 posted 2007-08-20 04:46 AM


the original version contained text that was not suitable to post as it stated self harm, so this is the modified version, the original version was "my wrists are cut my head is bowed" instead of "my heart now broken my head is bowed" i wanted to share this poem in its original context but would have it removed....

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-08-22 12:24 PM


"I look up slowly at your tear stained eyes
And plead to you in silent pain filled cries"

This was really amazing!! I always love your work But this is def one of my favorite!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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