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moondogz
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0 posted 2007-08-18 06:53 AM



They peered into my crib
with blood in their eye.

The ones I had previously
left to die.

Mother offered me
her swollen breast.

Forgetting I once fed her
to a dinner guest.

Brother Mike
remembered the spike.

I drove through his forehead
that fateful night.

The Saxons entered England
spoiling for a fight.

Brother Harry sang
like a canary.

When I lopped off his ears
first left, then right.

Father looked on
with a twisted grin.

When he saw in me
his original sin.

© Copyright 2007 Paul R Breen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-08-18 01:43 PM


I really liked this it was very interesting
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-08-18 02:39 PM


Very interesting.

I couldn't help but like it.

moondogz
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3 posted 2007-08-18 11:29 PM


wow...thanks guys.
BrittanyJ
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4 posted 2007-08-22 12:52 PM


hmm...different. I liked it

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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