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Yoinn
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0 posted 2007-08-16 07:51 PM


The Real Skinny

Thoughts strain between
reality and memories,
a smoking gun for
those who relate.
As if it were my sister,
fate has stolen my mirror.

Now I only see my ghosts
floating in the past.
No wisdom in the air,
no lessons learned.
Only the sadness and the pain.

I survive with a little whistle
and a two step around
the difference between
what is real
and what i feel.

Yoin

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-08-17 08:35 PM


I survive with a little whistle
and a two step around
the difference between
what is real
and what i feel.

~*~

Well, I don't often find myself in dark,
but your edge seems to soften to a lightness
of "what is, will be" scenario.

I'm going to enjoy reading you.

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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2 posted 2007-08-17 09:11 PM


wow, I really liked this one. Great to read dark poems again
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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3 posted 2007-08-18 08:52 PM


thank you sunshine and hunni for your kind replies.
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