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kasey191
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0 posted 2007-08-16 01:28 AM



I can't bring myself to stay here
Where i was once happy
instead i wander this house
Im not sure what happened,exactly
bt i kow that im lost
I cant talk to anyone
Without betraying them
With words of reassurance
even i cant believe
So i selfishly retreat
to the room i destroyed
with my silent death
whilst your out there,oblivious
& the guilt just makes it clearer
that i shouldn't be here
so i loose these days
within these four walls
i stumble around
trying to crawl
but im lost now
you never knew me
you just saw
who i tried to be

© Copyright 2007 Kasey Daye - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-08-16 01:34 AM


you never knew me
you just saw
who i tried to be~

Well, I really like this poem. I can really relate to this feeling to. Welcome to Passions.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

kasey191
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2 posted 2007-08-16 01:36 AM


Thank you
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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3 posted 2007-08-22 12:55 PM


"but im lost now
you never knew me
you just saw
who i tried to be"

wow, i really liked these line...they're so beautiful Nicely done.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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