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blue face
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since 2007-06-03
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0 posted 2007-08-10 11:22 AM



Red,White,

Black and Blue

Is what I see when I look at you.

Crying rain flys to the ground

as sadness creps withen me.

Tearstained is my face

as I see the song fade away from your lips.

Never thought saying good bye would mean so much.

Back into the gray house I once again go

but a stream of happeness fills my heart as my

dear friend helps me fight the deep depression.


© Copyright 2007 blue face - All Rights Reserved
littlefairy
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since 2007-08-06
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1 posted 2007-08-10 01:42 PM


That was nice. I liked the ending. Awesome. -Tara

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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2 posted 2007-08-17 07:39 PM


I really liked this blue!!! And if you ever need to talk, i'm always here

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-08-17 09:01 PM


Never thought saying good bye would mean so much.~

Woah been here before. I absolutely loved this blue
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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