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lovergurl
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0 posted 2007-08-06 02:22 PM



Baby, I just thought I should let you know. . .
That through these three months,
My love for you has done nothing but grow.
You're the first thing on my mind in the morning,
The last thing at night,
And, that's why my days are never really boring.
You're smile catches my eyes and melts my heart,
I get lost in the moment,
Just like I was from the start.
You're touch sends chills throughout my body,
And I find it hard not to smile,
I know you can see what you do to me.
Your kiss is unexplainable,
it's like someone sets off fireworks inside of me,
Please, know that you're really not dull.
I know I don't want to let you go,
So I'm here until you decide you want something new,
I just thought I should let you know. . .

Becca.

© Copyright 2007 Rebecca L. L. - All Rights Reserved
Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
1 posted 2007-08-06 10:31 PM


Nice poem.....not exactly dark but still it was nice.
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-08-06 10:33 PM


"So I'm here until you decide you want something new,
I just thought I should let you know. . ."

Wow, this was so sweet...i really like this a lot. It's def one of my favorite's by you

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08
Posts 59
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3 posted 2007-08-06 11:11 PM


awww.
hey thanks you guys.
=]
it was from the heart.

Becca.

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