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blue face
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0 posted 2007-08-05 01:37 PM



I lost my innocence somelong ago
My happiness fading away,
I stepped blinded into darkness
only to find that it was life.
I walk into a crowed of friends
only to feel more alone than ever.
As I fade away into the cold background
that was once known as home.


[This message has been edited by blue face (08-05-2007 05:32 PM).]

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BrittanyJ
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1 posted 2007-08-05 04:42 PM


"I walk into a crowed of fiends
only to feel more alone than ever"

I really liked this line. I've felt this so many times...nice poem

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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2 posted 2007-08-06 01:37 PM


yes, I've been here. I love how you made the feelings in your head flow so well on paper. If you even need someone to talk to, just email me...
Krysti.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

blue face
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3 posted 2007-08-07 10:02 AM


thanks guys!


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