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flesh mechanic
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since 2007-07-27
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puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)

0 posted 2007-07-31 12:28 PM


Rooms are slanted and hollow
especially the ones where i lay
it turns out i have swallowed
more than i could ever say
my time tends to wallow, in pity
its a price we all neednt pay
and the same exact thing follows
as i hush another dawning day
my skin has turned yellow
it so completely dried and flaked
stormy clouds begin to billow
and they stick with me untill i too turn grey
blood stains forming on my pillows
i cant see things in the same way
my love for her begins to willow
all the damage has been done, ok

concentrate on what you take in
one wrong move and your a goner
this is no longer perscription
its like my every breath is filled with water
my blood flow is running thin
but the sensation is gettting stronger
give me glue tearing from tin
this makes my trip to mars so much longer
its feeding back in full suspension
this is what i sought after
intangible descriptions
this is not the time for rapture
at moments there was a glassy darkness
im coming down no need to bother
someone forgive for i have sinned
i hope to god i dont end up like my father

and now that youve gotten from me
exactly what youve always wished for
now dont you go and wish for anymore

im tangled and torn like lace
not even a blind man could love my face
ive grown so tired and im ready to leave this place
cause ive fallen out of grace

it takes off, im lookking quick
wheres yesterdays tomorrow been
for too long ive been getting sick
rid me of this poison pen
elegiac from the devils trick
im reminded time and time again
nothing makes up for a needledick
im so ashamed its bent, its bent
another day behind this tunic
theres many phone calls ill regret to send
alligations i would lick
and sentements that i would mend
my mind is far too allocated
and theres places that i need to attend
ive broken everything its so pathetic
close the cutains on me.....  the end



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1 posted 2007-07-31 05:23 PM


"im tangled and torn like lace
not even a blind man could love my face
ive grown so tired and im ready to leave this place
cause ive fallen out of grace"

this was so sad...

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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2 posted 2007-07-31 09:03 PM


Oh my gosh!!

"im tangled and torn like lace
not even a blind man could love my face
ive grown so tired and im ready to leave this place
cause ive fallen out of grace"

I love this It's amazing!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

flesh mechanic
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 67
puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)
3 posted 2007-08-01 11:32 AM


its very sad but just writing that really helped me out of that very dark point in time..... thanks
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