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flesh mechanic
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 67
puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)

0 posted 2007-07-30 03:03 PM



Why do I,
have to wear my insecurities all over my body.
When will I,
be happy with myself and the direction of my life.

I wish that I could stop thinking,
and I think that I should start drinking.
look at time, its unraveling.
look at my life, its un raveling.

when I look in the mirror
Im so very diapointed.
Break the mirror and thats
self confication.

Why do I,
keep my hopes locked in my head.
When will I,
stop comparing myself to every other person.

I wish that I could just start to melt,
and I wish that you'd accept how I felt.
look at lust, its unraveling.
look at my trust, its unraveling.

When i look out the window
all I see is desperation.
cover the window and thats
self confiscation.

why do I,
push you all away, but still long for somebody.
woman or man,
seasons cant change like I can.

I wish that you could be more easy,
and I wish that you werent so pretty.
look at you your unraveling.
look all thats true is unraveling.

When I look in your eyes
I see my final destination.
Im leaveing you right now and that self confiscation..........

all that beauty, and all that desire.
Its setting my lungs on fire.

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-07-31 11:50 AM


"Why do I,
keep my hopes locked in my head.
When will I,
stop comparing myself to every other person."

I really liked this, and you don't suck. It was pretty good I hope to read more soon.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

flesh mechanic
Member
since 2007-07-27
Posts 67
puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)
2 posted 2007-08-01 11:37 AM


thanks, i guess its not that bad, its actually kind of funny because I preceive these writings so much differently than all you who read them, because theyre actually songs ive written, but im happy that they are enjoyable with out the sound

[This message has been edited by flesh mechanic (08-01-2007 12:14 PM).]

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