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lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08
Posts 59
va

0 posted 2007-07-27 12:19 PM



Don't Answer Everytime I call,
but yet you catch me when I fall.
Don't pay attention to me when I need you to,
but atleast you care, and say you do.
Your so close to perfection it scares me,
nobody could ever walk on this earth as perfect as you;this can't be.
and yes, I do know it's love playing tricks on me,
But don't you know I like it;can't you see?
I know I have trust issues,
but that's not new news.
I'm sorry if I can't just turn around and trust you fully,
but my heart has been bullied by many bullies.
I'm sorry at times I can't stop myself from crying,
I'm sorry if in the back of my mind I think "is he lying?"
I'm sorry i'm not open as much as you'd like me to be,
but that's just not me.
because I've been through alot,
and this is what I've ended up with;this is what I got.

Becca.

© Copyright 2007 Rebecca L. L. - All Rights Reserved
StormyB
Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42
Ohio Usa
1 posted 2007-07-27 05:10 PM


Very full of selfexpression. I liked it alot. The wonderful part of going through bad things is that we can grow and learn from them. Keep your head up.. one bad seed does not ruin the crop.
lovergurl
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since 2007-05-08
Posts 59
va
2 posted 2007-07-27 09:33 PM


thanks alot.
=]
I appreciate you commenting on my poem, they always make me smile.

Becca.

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