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andrey
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since 2007-04-27
Posts 29


0 posted 2007-07-26 09:56 AM


They say that blood
Is flowing through this veins
Tonight I'm finding out;
Were they all just lying?
Everything denying
Filled me with enraging doubts

Didn't found God
To free me from my pain
But I have no complain;
I searched Him all my life
They've cut me with a knife
Red stain, everything's in vain

Nothing left to say
The bleeding jut begun
Still the feeling is undefined;
I'm staring in my eyes
Trying a new disguise
Then wishing I was blind

I think I should
Try not let it waste
Be alright, leaving all behind
But you found me dying
Sweet words I was lying
I was entering your mind

But I'm just lying,
I'm not dying
Be alright!
Leave it all behind...


© Copyright 2007 andrey - All Rights Reserved
blue face
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

1 posted 2007-07-26 10:25 AM


this is great!I liked how the flow went
the meaning of it was magnificent
Hope to read more.

sarah

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