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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2007-07-25 01:37 AM




Can you tell me what it is you see?
When you look with disgust at me
Why it is that you always turn away
Without having anything to say.

We used to be the best of friends
Now you’re not willing to make amends
What did I do to make you hate me so?
All you wish is for me to go.

What is it that I did to wrong you?
Was it because I could see through you
See that all you said was just lies?
Is that the reason I am now despised?

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-07-25 11:05 AM


"We used to be the best of friends
Now you’re not willing to make amends
What did I do to make you hate me so?
All you wish is for me to go."

You always seem to speak my mind And better than i do, might i add. Another wonderful poem!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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