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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
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0 posted 2007-07-23 07:57 AM



i don't heal like i used to
i feel your pain
just that much less

i intend and hang with you
i stand in the rain
just that much I confess

i don't believe as I used to
princess

so it's time you talk the way
while you walk away

i was a could've been has been
even before I was

you my dear are here
a right now bridal idol

i walk away while you feign

slip tight slap fights
while you look away

so it's time to make due
time for you

i don't write like i used to
but i don't shame my pain
just that much less

J.L. Koehler


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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-07-23 10:48 AM


Very nice. The flow was a bit off, but i liked it none the less Well written.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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