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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
A trembling lip a tear in the eye Wanting nothing more other than to die No matter what I do, you make me cry Why is it that you are so naive? Why is it that you won’t believe? I give you love and you make me grieve Is it so hard for you to give in return? to be held in your arms is what I yearn instead of a kiss I get a fist, I never learn. Your black heart is as cold as steel Anger for me is all you ever feel No matter how hard I want our love to be real Is it so hard for you to let me in? Is our love to you an unforgivable sin? This is a game to you, I can’t win… I am sorry for the pain I brought you My cries of pain you seem deaf to. And now I’m going yet you still have no clue you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
having a bit of the writers block at the moment, not my best work i admit, but hopefully it is enough to stir the emotions... you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I liked it. It was quite touching...Nicely done. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
Very nice! I really liked it I can diff relate hope to read more. sarah |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahh I love thi it was really good  hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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