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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
A lone pale figure silhouetted on a moonlit hill top Standing, watching the land with tired eyes Cloak twisting and withering around his legs Having a life of its own, trying to free itself From this creature that has bound it to him This creature of the night without a soul This vampire an outcast from those alive As well as an outsider from his own kin Pale and gaunt his face shows no emotion This ghostly white being wishes for quiet A quiet from the demons in his troubled mind A retreat from this torturous immortality He turns now his mind a wander as he walks away His mind elsewhere as his body works on instinct Withdrawing to the safety of his hidden abode Waiting for the dreaded glowing sun to rise Waiting for yet another unbearable day to pass Waiting for another torturous night to end you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
nice poem! hope to read more. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
You always put so much emotion in your poem! I loved this one. It flowed so nicely  Very well written!! Bravo.So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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