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Dark Poetry #4

Then i'm gone...

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2007-07-15 06:56 PM

what will you do
when you call for me
and i don't come?

who will you turn
to when i dissapear
after you say we're done?

how will your heart heal
without me to help
pick the pieces up?

Where will you go
when your road runs out
and you've come to a stop?

who will help you up
the way i once did
when you fell?

how will you ever
be able to find your
way out of this Hell?

without me by your side
i'm afraid you can't
possibly go on.

but it's all your choice
i'm waiting for your words,
then i'm gone.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

1 posted 2007-07-16 02:12 PM

nice poem can diff relate to this
hope to read more.

blue

[This message has been edited by blue face (07-17-2007 01:38 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-07-17 08:17 PM

I liked this a lot as in Woah

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-17 09:15 PM

Thanks guys

I'm glad you liked.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

tearsofpain
Junior Member

since 2007-05-03

Posts 38

4 posted 2007-07-17 11:40 PM

I LIKE THIS ONE VERY PLEASANT THANKS

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